Rabu, 18 Februari 2009

my best friend



                 Hello friend! i will acquaintance my best friends. i have best friends. we

name is Erna,Ina,Lutvi,and Dian. Erna live in mriyunan, Ina live in mriyunan, Dian live in telaga rambit, and Lutvi live in telaga rambit. 
we are best friend since still fondantion school. i choice they so my best 
friends because they are good, friends loyal, and be honest. usully i to learn together. i pround with they are.  My friendship as cocoon.

# My message # 

That best friends very, very, very happy because can for story.

with out best friend living the feeling sad.

5 komentar:

  1. ASSALAMUALAIKUM....
    HI, ayu your writing is good but there not image in your writing,
    WASSALAM....

    BalasHapus
  2. assalamualaikum....!
    ayu your write is good.but,there isn't image n very little.please change it.ok???????????/
    Thankswassalamualaikum...!

    BalasHapus
  3. azzkum....
    your write is good, if you using
    letter not use the colour bright...
    ok !
    see you next time
    wazzkum

    BalasHapus
  4. ASSALAMUALAIKUM....
    hai ayu,your blog is good but in paragraph 3 your write is"usully" actually "usually".and the write is not untidi.
    WASSALAM....wr.wb

    BalasHapus
  5. Assalamualaikum............
    Hay Ayu....,I like your writing, but in your writing your write "we name is....." actually you must write "they name are....."...OK!!!!
    Thanks
    Wassalamualaikum.......

    BalasHapus